I - well, I don't really know what to say, except that it was fucking beautiful. I loved the dream-like quality you managed to maintain despite the fact that the fic in itself is... so hard-edged and bitter in places, and God it's two in the morning and I'm not making any sense, but the subtlety, the ambiguity of it all, the way neither they nor we nor even you really know who's to blame. And Ryo and Pi. And the scene in LA, which was much too amazing for my comment to do it any justice.
But not as much the orange juice section, which I adore to absolute bits ♥, because Kame taking away and punishing and not realising the significance of what he's doing or how representative it is of his relationship with Jin, and masking any awareness he might have by trying so hard to be reasonable, and Kame cynical and bitter and *_* as far as metaphors go I thought it was perfect.
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I - well, I don't really know what to say, except that it was fucking beautiful. I loved the dream-like quality you managed to maintain despite the fact that the fic in itself is... so hard-edged and bitter in places, and God it's two in the morning and I'm not making any sense, but the subtlety, the ambiguity of it all, the way neither they nor we nor even you really know who's to blame. And Ryo and Pi. And the scene in LA, which was much too amazing for my comment to do it any justice.
But not as much the orange juice section, which I adore to absolute bits ♥, because Kame taking away and punishing and not realising the significance of what he's doing or how representative it is of his relationship with Jin, and masking any awareness he might have by trying so hard to be reasonable, and Kame cynical and bitter and *_* as far as metaphors go I thought it was perfect.
Thank you so much for this!