Hahaha, I totally agree. XD Poor Jin. Kame suffers too, though. I obviously just like torturing the pair of them. I'm not sure how to feel about that, either. I am glad that you picked up on them both having flaws -- I really wanted that to come through.

I hate OTT-dumb Jin. He needs just a smidge of dumb, I think. :D

It did indeed make sense! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it! ♥