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Cat ([personal profile] hermiones) wrote2008-01-29 01:08 pm
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JE Fic: Sucker Love (Jin/Koki)

Title: Sucker Love
Pairing/Group: Jin/Koki
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Sex.
Summary: Written in exactly 60 minutes for the One Hour Porn challenge taking place later tonight (timezones prevented me from doing it 'live', so to speak!), on the theme of KAT-TUN's Lips PV. Please check back later, as I'll link to the other fics in the challenge then. :)

ETA: Other fics! Go check them out!
amanuan | goldengutgirl | imwahyou | iverin | jackoweskla | karinberry | mousapelli | pearljemz | shatteredinu | soucieux | spurious | wintersjuly | yamapea.





“If Kame walks in-” Koki hisses, but Jin doesn't seem to notice, so he can't finish the threat. Jin is like a man possessed at the moment, like something out of a horror film. He's been half-asleep at all the concerts they've done recently, worn out during the photoshoots, baleful and missing, somehow. Today, he's on fire. He's talking at six hundred miles an hour, he's been running around checking costumes and set and lighting, he's digging his hand into Koki's jeans as if there's gold in there.

“Jin, Jin-” Koki says, not that he disapproves, but really, a public bathroom cubicle?

“What. What?” Jin demands, visibly annoyed, wrapping his hand around Koki's cock.

“Just, what's.” He doesn't know how to end that sentence, either. “Where've you been? What's going on with you, man?”

Jin squares him a look, cocking his head to the side and curious, the fedora moving on his head. Koki gets a sudden image of what he's going to look like in this PV, and fuck, Kame's make-up isn't going to have anything on that.

“You want to be all metaphorical?” Jin asks, innocent everywhere except for the eyes. “I have your dick in my hands and you want to talk about my secret pain?”

“You have secret pain?” Koki asks, worriedly, but Jin just mutters, 'shut up, shut up', and starts to stroke, and it's rough, rougher than he normally likes it, but good. Good enough to forget words, good enough to forget everything except the feel of it, the sound of Jin's small cackle. He reaches out, grabs Jin's waistband, with a little bit of struggling reaches inside, tongue poking into his cheek.

Jin stops laughing.



They're sort of clumsily moving together, trying to keep their voices down. Jin has his hand across Koki's mouth and he's biting his own lip. It's good, too good to last. Jin can see it in Koki's eyes and Koki can feel it in Jin's hips.

“Fuck,” Koki says, around Jin's fingers. “Fuck, fuck, fuck, yes, fuck-”

Jin breathes out a smile, pleased, ever-so-smug.

And then Junno walks in.

Koki's eyes go wide and Jin looks at him, and there's a horrifying moment where neither of them know what to say, so they stay still and quiet.

“Is that you, Koki?” Junno asks, and Jin nudges his thigh with his knee. Their hands are still wrapped around each other. They should stop that, but the pain of it would be worse than the frustration.

“Yep,” Koki says. “Sorry. Just running through the schedule.”

“Oh,” Junno says. “Fair enough.”

There's a long pause, a horrible long pause, and Jin's practically climbing the walls. Junno hasn't noticed anything awry, it seems, only he's taking a stupidly long time and Jin's decided that he's going to murder him, or never let him drink again. One of the two.

Koki's eyes are darting from Jin to the ceiling. Jin's tempted to start up again because he has a problem with wanting to do inappropriate things all the time, but he doesn't, because Koki's clearly scared to death.

“See you out there,” Junno says, and leaves.

Koki breathes out, long and shaky, tugging fingers through his hair to have something to do with his hands. Jin whines a little at the sudden loss of contact, and realises that Koki's soft, anyway, they're just going to have to deal with it. One of those things.

The final call sounds, then, and Koki smiles apologetically.

“That was crazy,” he says, shaking his head. “Never again. Fucking cubicle, shit. That was stupid.”

“Yeah,” Jin agrees, slowly, tucking his clothes back in. A little sad, a little stupid.

Koki catches a look, narrows his eyes. “Come home with me after, okay?”

“Okay,” Jin says. That's more like it.



For the life of him, Junno can't work out why there were four feet visible under the door of that cubicle. He spends the rest of the day looking out for a girl with really big feet, sneaking around the set.



The shoot goes quickly, for once. Their PVs never do, for some reason: somebody's timing is usually off, Kame's being a perfectionist, Ueda needs retouched. It's a good thing that it goes quickly because Jin's frantic and horny and it shows in the performance. He keeps putting things in his mouth, turning to Koki with a little bit of a sneer, you could have had this around your cock, you cock, and it's doing horrible things to Koki's self-control.

Kame doesn't notice because he's all about his own performance. Nobody else notices because they're too busy staring at Kame. Koki raises the bar a bit: sticks his tongue out at Jin, Jin likes him thuggish and a bit silly. By the end of the filming, Jin is wound up like a spring and Koki's glad that his apartment isn't far away.

“That was weird,” Junno says to Ueda as they walk out. Koki's ears prick up and he sidelong glances at Jin, who just shrugs.

“I know,” Ueda says. “They're going to put in metallic vines or something, attached to our microphones-”

“No, not the video,” Junno says. “Just something. Weird.”

Ueda looks at him, frowning. “You're what's weird.”

“I am not,” Junno says, nudging Ueda's shoulder. “I saw Koki in the bathroom with someone earlier.”

“You're not sleeping enough,” Ueda says. “It's a closed set. Also, you look better blonde. Just thought you should know.”

“I did have more fun,” Junno says, sadly.



Koki opens the door while Jin's taking the stairs two at a time. He's just in the doorway when Jin pins him against the frame, and Koki has to wrestle him away to get the door shut. Jin is panting, hard, furious.

“I can't believe you stopped,” he's saying. “Fuck, I've been going crazy. Fucking crazy.”

“What was I supposed to do?” Koki says, laughing, mostly with relief. “Let Junno hear you come? I don't fucking think so.”

“I'm very quiet,” Jin protests.

“You're not that quiet.” Koki counters, folding his arms. “You're not. I used to share hotel rooms with you, idiot. I know you're not quiet.”

“I can be quiet,” Jin says, sulking, mirroring Koki, arms folded, frown on his face.

“I don't believe it,” Koki says. “It'd be like asking space to be small for a bit. It's just not gonna happen.”

“Okay,” Jin says. He likes challenges. “Try me.”

Koki studies him, cocking his head. A little smirk spreads across his face.

“Alright,” he says. “Get in the bedroom and get naked. Prep up. I'll be there in a minute. If I hear you make one sound, I'm not coming in at all.”



Koki watches the tail-end of the baseball on television and at least ten minutes of the news. After that, he downs the last of a call of grape Fanta, and then he saunters into the bedroom. Jin is positively, delightfully, furious. He opens his mouth to speak when Koki walks in, but Koki holds up his hand and Jin swallows it down. Koki climbs up on the bed, strokes the line of Jin's hip, his thigh. He guides Jin's hand to his jeans, folding Jin's fingers over the button, the zipper. Together, they unclothe him, Jin's eyes darting from clothing to Koki's face with thinly-veiled rage.

When it's done, Koki lies down on the bed and Jin just looks at him, tongue poking into his cheek. Koki smirks, slow and measured and horny, and wraps an arm around Jin's back. With all of the casual swagger he can muster, he pulls Jin into his lap. Jin leans back, immediately, nostrils flaring, takes him in. Koki wasn't expecting that and he huffs breath, digging his nails into Jin's hip. Jin's lips part, but no sound escapes. There's effort written into his face. Jin isn't good at being quiet. Jin's very good at making noise. This is going against his nature. This is repression. This is really fucking hot.

Jin doesn't wait for Koki to be ready, because he's been waiting for hours and it's good moreorless from the beginning, the discomfort will work itself out. Straightaway, Jin's found a rhythm that's fast, that's hard, and Koki has to hold him still because he won't last like that--

“Jin,” he says, hands firm, face tight and eyes lidded. “Wait a fucking minute-”

Jin opens his mouth to reply, but remembers himself, shrugs his shoulders. His eyes are black. His thighs are shaking. He's horny as hell and not prepared to wait for it, Koki can see that. Slowly, he lets go of Jin's hips, inch by inch, feeling him speed up as control comes back to him. Jin's hips are like nothing else he's ever had riding him: they move so fast and so fluidly that Koki can't sense where the movement begins and ends. There's no jerk, no staccato. It's all liquid, like a wave, the exact same undulation every single time.

“Fuck,” he says, leaving his hands there, feeling movement but not holding it back. It'd be more practical to try and hold back a wave, he knows that, than to try and control Jin. Jin is a force of nature. “Yes, Jin, fuck, yes. That's so fucking-”

“Stop talking,” Jin spits, hands moving up his body, touching, longer where it's really nice, finally burying in his hair. His chin is tilted back and he's searching for something. The perfect rhythm, possibly. He's trying to find the spot that's going to drive him completely fucking nuts. “Just stop talking.”

“You're the one who's not supposed to be-” Koki begins, but it's hopeless, it always has been. Force of nature.

“I can't,” Jin's saying. “I can't, I can't, I can't-”

“Slow the fuck down, then,” Koki says, grabbing the edge of Jin's hip, making him cry out.

“No, I meant. I can't be quiet. I can't be quiet. Let it go, fuck, Koki-”

“Jin, you're seriously-”

“I need this, I need this, please, just let-”

Jin is never like this. Jin is rough, selfish, demanding, horny, gorgeous, but not like this. This is different. This is something else, something Koki can't pinpoint. He watches Jin thrash and writhe, trying to understand what it is that Jin needs, that's not pleasure. He's in the right place, Koki can feel it. But that's not it. He doesn't understand.

“What do you-” he says, frowning, unable to let go. There's something-

Jin looks at him, eyes huge and wild, barely focused. “Please-”

In that moment, Koki gets it.



With Jin on his back, it's easier. Everything slots into place. Jin gives himself up more easily, placated and needy and submissive, and Koki holds his hands above his head until he mewls, fucks him until he gets the right sound. Not the one Jin makes out of the side of his mouth when he's trying to pretend he's not close, the one he makes when he no longer cares. The full-bodied, full-lipped one, the one that's honest and horny and true.

“Fuck,” he's saying. “Yes, fuck, yes, harder. Harder. Harder.”

“I'll kill you if I do it any harder,” Koki spits, clawing the side of Jin's back. “Shut up, idiot.”

Jin's hips are pushing back up, taking it harder, deeper, faster. Koki leans over him, licks a clean line from his collarbone to earlobe, Jin's body rising up into it. He's thrumming like a vibration on a guitar string, so Koki does it again and again and again, until Jin's shifting and pushing his cock against Koki's stomach for friction.

“There, there,” he's gasping. “Don't move, don't fucking move. There, please, there-”

“Fuck,” Koki says, into Jin's ear, “Please tell me you're close, Jin. I can't fucking take this.”

Jin's hands are contracting on Koki's back, deep enough to leave half-moon imprints. That's all the answer Koki needs, really, but he loves to hear him say it.

“Two more-” he stutters out, like it's a promise, like he can promise--

Two more, and he does. His whole body rises up and his arms wrap around Koki and his hips stop, just for a fleeting moment, every single part of him tense and prickling and a sound, on hold, behind his lips. That moment seems to go on forever, until the thread breaks and he goes weak, and everything explodes.



Jin is trying to drink grape Fanta lying down and it's going all over the bedsheets.

“What was that all about,” Koki says, stroking Jin's shoulder, all sticky and vaguely purple. “I just changed those.”

“I'm not talking about my secret pain,” Jin retorts. “Is it in my hair?”

“Yeah,” Koki says. “It's going everywhere, stupid.”

“I needed that,” Jin says, eventually. “I'm just tired at the moment. Things don't feel right. You ever feel like that?”

“Yeah,” Koki says. “It'll pass.”

“I know,” Jin says. Koki wants to do something, to squeeze his hand, to make him feel better. Jin looks over at him, impish.

“But I'll probably need a lot of that, in the meantime.”



“He definitely had a girl in there,” Junno says on the 'phone, much later.

“I don't think so,” Kame says. “Not Koki. Anyway, it was a closed set.”

“I'm telling you, there were two pairs of feet in there.”

“You've been pretty busy, ne,” Kame comments. “Maybe you should take a holiday.”

“Are you saying that I'm seeing things?”

“Um,” Kame doesn't know how to answer that. There's the sound of a giggle in the background, sort of drunken, definitely high-pitched. “I'll call you back.”

“Don't think I don't know what you're doing,” Junno says, mournfully. “Can you check it's not the girl on the set today, because-”

Kame hangs up.



Jin hangs out of Koki's apartment window, smoking. His jeans aren't on properly, and Koki doesn't think they're even his jeans. He watches for a while, and then can't take it any longer.

“Jin,” he says. “If you want to, you can talk to me.”

Jin thinks for a moment, turns over on the frame, smokes up towards the sky. “Koki,” he says slowly, stubbing out the butt and dropping it. “I just did. That was me talking, okay?”

Koki thinks on that, watching Jin, staring at the sky.

“Yeah, okay,” he says. “I get that. Just, most people talk with their clothes on.”

“Yeah, well,” Jin says, fingering the necklace around his neck. It's giving Koki flashbacks, and he wishes that he'd stop it. “I'm not most people, right?”

Feeling that he should change the subject, Koki scowls at Jin's fingers.

“I can't believe you stole my necklace,” he says. “What kind of fucking person are you? One hand around my dick, the other stealing my jewelry.”

Jin just smiles. “You noticed when I put it in my mouth, huh,” he says.

“I think you should make it up to me,” Koki says. “It was expensive, that.”

Jin's eyes meet his, and he leans forward, slamming the window shut.

“Alright, then,” he says.

[identity profile] samenashi.livejournal.com 2008-01-29 01:20 pm (UTC)(link)
I stared at the label Jin/Koki for a good couple of minutes, trying to decide whether or not I could read it, but it was totally worth it for the Ueda & Junno scene. Happy.

[identity profile] burritos.livejournal.com 2008-01-29 01:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, that quick, haha. I'm really glad you decided to read it despite the pairing. ♥ I love writing both Ueda and Junno -- I think it's a shame that I don't love any major pairings involving them!

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[identity profile] pixxers.livejournal.com 2008-01-29 02:00 pm (UTC)(link)
I couldn't not read it. :| I didn't want to, but I had to.

That was delicious. ♥

[identity profile] burritos.livejournal.com 2008-01-29 02:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee. I'm sorry. ;)

I'm so glad you liked it. ♥
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[identity profile] burritos.livejournal.com 2008-01-29 02:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!! ♥ I'm really glad you enjoyed it so much. :D

[identity profile] swtjemz.livejournal.com 2008-01-29 02:42 pm (UTC)(link)
aj;flkasjf

JIN/KOKI.

I can't believe it and yet, I WANT MORE. How do you do this to meeeeeeeeeeee?!?!? Jin all needy and Koki just giving in to Jin and Junno's confusion and a;sfj;asfa;fkja;sfkj;asklfjas;lfk. *incoherent*


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I am pretty excited for all the fic coming out tonight!!!!

[identity profile] burritos.livejournal.com 2008-01-29 02:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Haha, if I weren't so obsessed with Pin, I'd write a lot of Jin/Koki. I love it. :D

I'm really glad you enjoyed it. ♥ Can't wait to see the fics tonight!

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[identity profile] rolling-scone.livejournal.com 2008-01-29 02:51 pm (UTC)(link)
He spends the rest of the day looking out for a girl with really big feet, sneaking around the set.

...ilu.

[identity profile] burritos.livejournal.com 2008-01-29 02:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Hahaha, I'm so mean to Junno. XD;

[identity profile] musikologie.livejournal.com 2008-01-29 03:38 pm (UTC)(link)
asdkfklja internet ate my comment, booooo

Anyway, after dying over Junno and his looking for big feet (OMG JUNNO), this was so great. I love the feeling, and Jin's neediness and Koki's wanting to help, and also, did I mention it was rly hot?!

I can't want to write about this tonight, eeeeeeeeeeee!
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[personal profile] padfoot 2008-01-29 04:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! ♥ I love writing Junno now, I don't know what it is. XD; I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :)

I can't wait to see all of your stories, oh man! *_*
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[identity profile] spurious.livejournal.com 2008-01-29 04:32 pm (UTC)(link)
I have say, my favorite part of this was this scene:

“You're not sleeping enough,” Ueda says. “It's a closed set. Also, you look better blonde. Just thought you should know.”

“I did have more fun,” Junno says, sadly.


And the sex was hot as hell, of course.
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[personal profile] padfoot 2008-01-29 04:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Hahahaha, oh man, I love writing Junno. He's just...Junno. I love him. XD;

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

[identity profile] pixisticks.livejournal.com 2008-01-29 11:55 pm (UTC)(link)
You know, if I didn't love you as much as I do, I don't think I would ever read Koki!fic in my life (except to say that I've read fic about Jin doing everyone in KAT-TUN and NewS). But I figure if Jin is in it, his hotness can overcome anything. *___*

LOL@Jin stealing Koki's jewelry. xDDD And his special form of talking. Oh Jin. You can talk to me anytime. ^_~

[identity profile] burritos.livejournal.com 2008-01-30 10:56 am (UTC)(link)
Heh! Thank you very much. ♥ I am...curious about that orgy!fic, it must be said. ;D

I want a Jin of my very own... :D

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[identity profile] guiltyschu.livejournal.com 2008-01-30 02:54 am (UTC)(link)
“You're not sleeping enough,” Ueda says. “It's a closed set. Also, you look better blonde. Just thought you should know.”

“I did have more fun,” Junno says, sadly.


AHAHAHAHAHAHA. XD Your fledgling Junno-love is showing.

Jin thinks for a moment, turns over on the frame, smokes up towards the sky. “Koki,” he says slowly, stubbing out the butt and dropping it. “I just did. That was me talking, okay?”

Koki thinks on that, watching Jin, staring at the sky.


D: D: D: Sad, but pretty.

And of course, the porn was hot. You know I love Jin/Koki. :D

[identity profile] burritos.livejournal.com 2008-01-30 10:57 am (UTC)(link)
Hee. I thought of you when I wrote it, as Jin/Koki was the second thing I ever wrote in fandom. ;) I'm so glad you liked it. ♥

I love Junno!!!

[identity profile] wintersjuly.livejournal.com 2008-01-30 03:59 am (UTC)(link)
“You have secret pain?” Koki asks, worriedly,

AKhsklslhlsfhkslsglh THIS IS WHEN I CRACKED UP COMPLETELY.

[identity profile] burritos.livejournal.com 2008-01-30 10:58 am (UTC)(link)
Hehehehe, oh Koki. So fails at gangsta. ♥

[identity profile] mousapelli.livejournal.com 2008-01-30 04:32 am (UTC)(link)
YES. i have so much YES for this! Junno! Ueda! Kame!

and yeah, the Jin/Koki was totally hot too, and i love the way they're friends first, and boys, rough and a little mean, only koki's trying not to be, but that's sort of what Jin wants anyway.

but mostly it was the little touches of everyone that made it awesome. I was giggling the whole way through!

[identity profile] burritos.livejournal.com 2008-01-30 10:58 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much! ♥ That's really exactly what I wanted it to portray, so I'm so glad it came across. I'm glad you liked it! :)

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YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

DO I SOUND LIKE A HORNY FANGIRL BECUAUSE ;GLEKG;LAGDLGMLGFEG
i srsly think you all are trying to kill me.
I'VE ONLY GONE THROUGH TWO OF THESE AND ALREADY I'VE LOST MY DAMN MIND
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( GLOMPS AND FLAILS WILDLY )

[identity profile] burritos.livejournal.com 2008-01-30 10:59 am (UTC)(link)
Hahahaha, oh man. Thank you very much. :D Going to go and check out the others now! :D

[identity profile] goldengutgirl.livejournal.com 2008-01-30 04:44 am (UTC)(link)
WHATTHESEX. *____*

(you guys wrote so long for 60 minutes dfhdgf and somehow as much as this is hilarious, I. I found it so hot in this rugged way. It must be Koki dhjgdsfg)

[identity profile] burritos.livejournal.com 2008-01-30 10:59 am (UTC)(link)
Oh my God, your icon. *_*

Thank you! ♥ I agree -- I think it's the Koki effect. ;)

[identity profile] mujun.livejournal.com 2008-01-30 04:45 am (UTC)(link)
My first Koki porn! And it was good! Yay!

[identity profile] burritos.livejournal.com 2008-01-30 10:59 am (UTC)(link)
Hurrah! ;) I'm glad you liked it!

[identity profile] ibythetide.livejournal.com 2008-01-30 05:08 am (UTC)(link)
jin as a girl with big feet hiding secret pain will forever haunt me! the byplay between junno & ueda was great and koki is hot no matter what. your brilliance is stunning.

[identity profile] burritos.livejournal.com 2008-01-30 11:00 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much!! ♥ I'm really glad you liked it.

[identity profile] ky-rin.livejournal.com 2008-01-30 01:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Um the porn was really hot. I think you write it really well and its absolutely amazing and it burns.

My morning is so much brighter and warmer now.
Junno needs to get laid, and who was Kame with, what!

I love the way KT inspires so much pron.
<333
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[personal profile] padfoot 2008-01-31 01:38 am (UTC)(link)
Hee, thank you so much. I'm pleased that I brightened your morning! ♥

In my head, Kame's straight. Sorry. XD; Junno does need to get laid. I'm sad that I don't have a Junno ship!

KT are just slutty boys, aren't they? ;)

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[identity profile] leia-va.livejournal.com 2008-01-30 03:19 pm (UTC)(link)
fsdfgsdfgsdf Koki. Jin. Tentacles. ::flailing::

I love this PV. And the fic [srsly there should be more Koki/Jin love].
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[personal profile] padfoot 2008-01-31 01:38 am (UTC)(link)
Hee, I love the PV, too. So glad you liked the fic! ♥ (Jin/Koki is love, isn't it? Underrated!)

[identity profile] hungry-worm.livejournal.com 2008-01-30 06:19 pm (UTC)(link)
For the life of him, Junno can't work out why there were four feet visible under the door of that cubicle. He spends the rest of the day looking out for a girl with really big feet, sneaking around the set.
♥;;

This was nice. Also, HOT. *_* It's in fact the first time I've ever read Koki/anyone and liked it. Not that I read a lot of KAT-TUN fics in general, but the challenge spawned by the PV kind of convinced me. XD Jin attempting to drink lying down and not talking about his secret pain. Scared Koki in the cubicle. Genius.

“I can't believe you stole my necklace,” he says. “What kind of fucking person are you? One hand around my dick, the other stealing my jewelry.”

XD

Thanks for writing and sharing!
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[personal profile] padfoot 2008-01-31 01:40 am (UTC)(link)
Hee! I'm thrilled you liked it so much. ♥ The challenge was awesome -- I can't believe how much fic it spawned! :D

Thank you for reviewing! :)
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[identity profile] yamapea.livejournal.com 2008-01-30 06:26 pm (UTC)(link)
OH MY GOD I HAVE WANTED JIN/KOKI FOR SO LONG THIS IS FUCKING MARVELOUS. *_______* sd;fisaogh god I don't even know where to begin. I love your writing so much. :( I loved everything about this.
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[personal profile] padfoot 2008-01-31 01:41 am (UTC)(link)
DO NOT USE THAT ICON AGAINST ME. *_* I WAS UNPREPARED.

I'm so glad you liked it! :D I've only written Jin/Koki once before -- really should do more, because it's a wicked pairing. Thank you for reviewing, hon. :D

[identity profile] phonestrap.livejournal.com 2008-01-30 08:13 pm (UTC)(link)
“I can't believe you stole my necklace,” he says. “What kind of fucking person are you? One hand around my dick, the other stealing my jewelry.”
Jin is obviously very good with his hands... among other things, of course.

My first Jin / Koki fic ever... and I loved it. *_____* And I got to love the way Jin copes with his "secret pain." XDD
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[personal profile] padfoot 2008-01-31 01:42 am (UTC)(link)
Jin's skilled that way. ;D

Oh man, I'm so pleased! ♥ Thank you for saying so. :D I think we'd all like to provide Jin with some, um, therapy. ;D
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[personal profile] thunder 2008-01-30 10:31 pm (UTC)(link)
I, uhh, really want to talk to Jin and help him out with his secret pain.




YESSSS.
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[personal profile] padfoot 2008-01-31 01:43 am (UTC)(link)
DON'T WE ALL. :D :D :D

[identity profile] anamuan.livejournal.com 2008-01-31 12:15 am (UTC)(link)
OH. MY. GOD. OH. MY. GOD. I. I. I JUST. NO WORDS. *_________*

“I did have more fun,” Junno says, sadly.
XD poor, poor confused Junno.

[identity profile] anamuan.livejournal.com 2008-01-31 12:16 am (UTC)(link)
also, there should be more Koki/Jin in the world, yes.

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[identity profile] imwahyou.livejournal.com 2008-01-31 01:22 am (UTC)(link)
laughing and dying. asldkfjasldfj omg.
like this one: “I did have more fun,” Junno says, sadly.
and all the other similar bits.

and the pornnnnnnn. rough. I love it. *____*

♥♥♥
padfoot: ([pot] ryoma: and it rolls like a wave)

[personal profile] padfoot 2008-01-31 01:45 am (UTC)(link)
Hee, thank you! ♥ Thank you for commenting. :D I love writing rough porn. It's a problem. XD;

[identity profile] saturnianlove.livejournal.com 2008-01-31 10:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, this is amazingly hot.

And every Junno bit. How is Junno so awesome.
padfoot: (Default)

[personal profile] padfoot 2008-02-01 11:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! ♥

Junno is just. He's just Junno. How did I not realise how awesome he was before now?

[identity profile] kestral-kitsune.livejournal.com 2008-01-31 11:34 pm (UTC)(link)
-is goingto have to reread to figure out when jin ninja's koki's necklace-

that was hot... i rarely read jpop yaoi...but duude that was hot.
padfoot: ([film] ghibli: heroes rise)

[personal profile] padfoot 2008-02-01 11:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Haha, it was so sneakily done that it wasn't mentioned, even. ;)

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. ♥

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