ext_130868 ([identity profile] eragon22.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hermiones 2009-12-23 10:42 pm (UTC)

This was....OMG..I rarely, if ever read Pin but this story. I mean wow...You have samurais and pirates and rockstars and a deep plot that entwines everything together, into one heck of a fanfic.

I loved the recurring motives, how Jin and Pi were reminded of their past lives and how they managed to find each other and hold onto each other, against all odds. Your language is beautiful and I especially enjoyed the ryhmes. You´re one heck of a story teller :)

The last paragraph was perfect, especially the last lines. This is one of the best fics I have ever read, despite the pairing. Just pure brilliance ♥♥♥

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