ext_77887 ([identity profile] taylormercury.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hermiones 2008-04-11 12:34 pm (UTC)

I think I just spent about two days reading all of this, and just....wow. The last section, that final paragraph, gave me honest to god chills, down the spine. And that only ever happens when I read the really, really stuff.

After reading my way through all of this I simply have to say I am stunned, and don't really know how to leave a comment that will do this justice. I'm amazed that you managed to take these two, to take guys from a Japanese boyband and weave them into this, something that feels so real, something that reads like an honest-to-god book. This doesn't feel like fanfiction at all, it's an entire story all of its own.

Everything about this I loved, the style of writing, the language (you are really, really good), the emotions, the events, the descriptions, the dialogue, the action, the supernatural elements were handled well and the angst, too, there were parts that made me feel impossibly sad, and the whole Pin through the lifetimes things was very bittersweet. I just...I loved every single word of this, and I don't know what else to say because I'm pretty much speechless.

Wow. Just, wow. I feel the same way I do after finishing an amazing book. Stunned.

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