oh god. You're brilliant. You're shiny shiny brilliant. The dagger is trailing smoke. Yamapi's eyes are wide. Wet, too, but mostly wide. The skin isn't pierced, but a white outline remains. As Yamapi moves the dagger point around the place where Jin's heart lies, a shape is drawn in white foam. This part right here, up until now my chest was so tight with tension and now suddenly I feel like I can breathe again and I'm dizzy, lightheaded with relief. Beautiful, beautiful job.

lj ate my comment so this isn't exactly what i wanted to say, but. This is wonderful, and perfect, and absolutely crushing and i love it. I'm literally bawling and it's so well written it's almost ridiculous and then the end with the letter and. You've got me tangled up into such an emotional knot I don't even know what I'm feeling, much able to describe it to anyone else. Which speaks directly to your awesome righting. and and and. I. I give up on words.