I used a lot of time reading your story. Because english is not my language and i lack some vocabulary (btw, sorry for the mistakes i could write) but OH MY GOD! Even when reading it with a dictionnary is just AWESOME OO"
I had the felling of being in Pirates of tha caribbean and i KNEW as soon as they touched land that something DREADFUL would arrive xD I wasn't wrong, though --"
I cried since they came on the land till now. I'm still crying and i'm sure i will have nightmarish night...
But, THANK YOU for the writing. Thank you so much to make me dream (or have nightmares..) I look forward to read what's next x)
Once more, Thank you to write that good and to share this with us !

PS: I'm kinda late, sorry ! ^^"