ext_184512 ([identity profile] saturnianlove.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hermiones 2007-10-07 02:51 am (UTC)

oh my god ;______; this was so sweet, the ending, oh my god. Your metaphor of a grlfriend and a wife was so creative and worked so well, and you wrote some of my favorite Pin and now you wrote my new favorite RyoPi so is it wrong for me to worship you? holy crap. this is beyond awesome. I was like god, this is great, through the whole thing and then you hit me with this ending. dying. dying. And you write the best sex scenes ever, you really do.

favorites:
Tegoshi taking Ryo's place and owning Ryo xD
Ryo turning to a cooking show ♥
how funny Yamapi is before/during sex. oh Yamapi ♥ toothbrush, condoms ahaha

Yamapi, when in the mood, has a characteristic lack of self-consciousness and he happily prepares himself whilst Ryo watches, all hard and breathing through his nostrils, until Ryo feels he'd rather like to put a stop to that and tease Yamapi a bit himself.
THAT. THAT LINE. KILLED ME GOOD.

Yamapi moves up for the last few seconds, pushes them both upright until he's in Ryo's lap, limp and weak as a kitten.
...holy sdklfjsdjk!

They're both unkempt, hair sticking up and sweat like a river running down the sheets and everywhere, but Ryo's never seen anything this beautiful or this right.
you are killing me and I love you so much for that

honestly, you had me at To sit on a beach with Yamapi.

Post a comment in response:

This account has disabled anonymous posting.
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting