http://rin223.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] rin223.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hermiones 2007-09-17 11:09 pm (UTC)

cool!!! i remember shige said he wanted to take his girlfriend to disneyland so it's all good...even though it was jin that took him. XD

i liked how you captured jin. it was really...real. not all baka all the time, but kind of silly, kind of misunderstood kind of jin. lol. sorry, my sentences don't make sense.

but yeah. and your shige...wow. haha. i like the last line. nice way to end a great story!!! =]

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