There are not enough keysmashes in the world to describe the awesomeness behind this fic. Everything, down to the littlest details, are perfect. I love that this fic builds itself entirely around the witty dialogue. You made these two dimensional characters real to me and that is truly a gift I hope you continue to harbor.
I have only recently reaffirmed my love for Tenipuri again, but this just takes the cake. Just, Hyoutei being Hyoutei. I really loved the characterization of Oshitari in this--he stole the fic for me, I think. Oh gosh, and Hiyoshi's little one liners that had me cracking up. Kabaji, Jirou and Gakuto--all of them were wonderful side characters. Choutarou being so sweet and honest about his girlfriend in the end. So adorable.
But most of all, Atobe and Shishido. Wow. They were fantastically characterized and I loved all of their exchanges with each other. I was totally flailing during some parts.
Baw, this is so, so good. ♥ I'm definitely bookmarking it.
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There are not enough keysmashes in the world to describe the awesomeness behind this fic. Everything, down to the littlest details, are perfect. I love that this fic builds itself entirely around the witty dialogue. You made these two dimensional characters real to me and that is truly a gift I hope you continue to harbor.
I have only recently reaffirmed my love for Tenipuri again, but this just takes the cake. Just, Hyoutei being Hyoutei. I really loved the characterization of Oshitari in this--he stole the fic for me, I think. Oh gosh, and Hiyoshi's little one liners that had me cracking up. Kabaji, Jirou and Gakuto--all of them were wonderful side characters. Choutarou being so sweet and honest about his girlfriend in the end. So adorable.
But most of all, Atobe and Shishido. Wow. They were fantastically characterized and I loved all of their exchanges with each other. I was totally flailing during some parts.
Baw, this is so, so good. ♥ I'm definitely bookmarking it.