A friend of mine linked to this, and I'm so glad she did.

I've spent the last little while cracking up at what you've written. It's too funny for words.

But then Atobe's mom's card just absolutely stopped me and made me smile and wibble a little. I'm impressed with all the emotions in this fic - they fit together so well without overwhelming each other. Awesome, awesome job. I totally can't wait for the last part.