ext_322601 ([identity profile] bunnysquee.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hermiones 2008-10-04 08:30 pm (UTC)

oh wow! this was all sorts of wonderful! their conversations made me laugh. i love that the three of them fulfill different needs in each other, and that they're different and yet the same, like they all think atobe's secretary's shoes are hot, hahah! i also love that atobe works so hard and yet cares so much for shishido and oshitari.

atobe's mother's card at the end made me all teary-eyed.

i love that you've moved them ahead by almost a decade and a half and still kept them pretty much in character.

brilliant stuff - i cannot wait for the next chapter.

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