Umn... yeah. This fic was just totally great. It's been so long since I've read a really good AtoShishi fic, and it made me miss this pairing so much.
I liked it how they actually act like boys in here. I usually don't like het in PoT, but the way you weaved it into the story was totally believable. And the interactions... so like them! The last paragraph was just pure win, but this:
“I have a girlfriend,” Shishido announces, at their next practice.
“I can fly,” Gakuto says.
“A sheep is my mother,” Jirou says.
“Something else that's totally unbelievable,” Hiyoshi says, boredly turning his tennis racket over and over.
“I hate this team,” Shishido says. “I do have a girlfriend!”
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I liked it how they actually act like boys in here. I usually don't like het in PoT, but the way you weaved it into the story was totally believable. And the interactions... so like them! The last paragraph was just pure win, but this:
“I have a girlfriend,” Shishido announces, at their next practice.
“I can fly,” Gakuto says.
“A sheep is my mother,” Jirou says.
“Something else that's totally unbelievable,” Hiyoshi says, boredly turning his tennis racket over and over.
“I hate this team,” Shishido says. “I do have a girlfriend!”
made me laugh so hard... XD Poor Shishido~