“I'm going to go back to China to film mine,” Hankyung says. “Please let me come with you,” Siwon says, in perfect Mandarin. *giggles* Poor long-suffering Shiwon.
There's a moment of silence where Kangin can't breathe, and then Eeteuk says, 'yes', and the 'yes' is so joyful, so full of life and light and air that Kangin smiles, too. Somehow, it's right. Even though it aches, it's right. “Good,” he says. “I'm happy, too.” Oh, Kangin.
“It's alright,” Kangin says. “Your intentions were good.” “Shut up,” Eeteuk says. “No,” Kangin says. “Calm down. Don't get me wrong.” “Obey me!” Full House references for the WIN. XD
Oh, there are so many lines that I could quote back at you, but that would take up an awful lot of this comment.
This is a hell of a first Suju fic. This was really, really lovely. ♥ You had the characters down to a T, especially Kangin and Eeteuk and HEECHUL, with all of his arrogance and sarcasm masking his insecurities. I loved the way you wrote the Kangteuk scenes and the ease they have with each other, and the Kangchul scenes with their insults and snappy comebacks that's totally them. The Kangteuk driving scene was perfect, and the way it paralleled the second Kangchul sex scene was kind of genius. ♥ The tiny bits with Donghae's cooking cracked me up. Poor boy, I love him even if he is a failure in the kitchen.
Long, but perfectly paced to show the transition between Kangin being in love with Eeteuk to Kangin being in love with Heechul. And I like that the first time they have sex doesn't magically solve everything. The ending was perfect for them. I kind of wish all of the members got a chance to be in the fic, though, considering how long it was.
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“Please let me come with you,” Siwon says, in perfect Mandarin.
*giggles* Poor long-suffering Shiwon.
There's a moment of silence where Kangin can't breathe, and then Eeteuk says, 'yes', and the 'yes' is so joyful, so full of life and light and air that Kangin smiles, too. Somehow, it's right. Even though it aches, it's right.
“Good,” he says. “I'm happy, too.”
Oh, Kangin.
“It's alright,” Kangin says. “Your intentions were good.”
“Shut up,” Eeteuk says.
“No,” Kangin says. “Calm down. Don't get me wrong.”
“Obey me!”
Full House references for the WIN. XD
Oh, there are so many lines that I could quote back at you, but that would take up an awful lot of this comment.
This is a hell of a first Suju fic. This was really, really lovely. ♥ You had the characters down to a T, especially Kangin and Eeteuk and HEECHUL, with all of his arrogance and sarcasm masking his insecurities. I loved the way you wrote the Kangteuk scenes and the ease they have with each other, and the Kangchul scenes with their insults and snappy comebacks that's totally them. The Kangteuk driving scene was perfect, and the way it paralleled the second Kangchul sex scene was kind of genius. ♥ The tiny bits with Donghae's cooking cracked me up. Poor boy, I love him even if he is a failure in the kitchen.
Long, but perfectly paced to show the transition between Kangin being in love with Eeteuk to Kangin being in love with Heechul. And I like that the first time they have sex doesn't magically solve everything. The ending was perfect for them. I kind of wish all of the members got a chance to be in the fic, though, considering how long it was.
Overall: ♥ Write more. Please, write more.