I have no idea who these boys are, and my comment won't do any justice to the fic, but...

The way you write I don't need to know what they look like to be able to find out a little of what they're like. I think my heart sort of fell for Heechul, or something. lkajslaksjd I have only flailing and the cat - the cat has great attitude XD why do these boys sound so adorable alskjdasd

And collarbone biting's just kinda hot *______*