ext_30519 ([identity profile] snowqueenofhoth.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hermiones 2007-04-23 02:01 pm (UTC)

I like how it's not suave, as you say. It's really nice that you wrote it more natural. It's still hot, and yet not cheesy. They're guys and they laugh and joke and yeah. NIIIICE job. :)
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