gee, I'm speechless. you kept me mesmerized from first to last line, and now what? a part 02? O__O IF ANYONE DIES I WONT READ THE END! *pouts* it's like a masterpiece you have created here. it's so much more that a mere fic. it's like.. art, magic, whatever. I don't know how the hell you friggin do it but it's brilliant and don't laugh at me for thinking that, in case you find great pleasure in writing a bunch of things that you find corny, and then laugh at the lame fangirls fussing over everything with depth.
I love how it all starts out as a very normal fic, about normal people with normal (or something) problems. and I love how one really dont see the supernatural things. like, I wasn't getting a thing during a very long period of time, and thought that kame and his blackouts were hilariously weird (guess I'm somewhat slow XD), but when I finally understood what it was all about, I was like... "AWESOME! *doesn't know where to go in fascination*" And I love the relationship between jin and kame, and kame being terrified, uncomfortable. you don't see that often in fics. it's complex, in this intellegent sort of way. and I've read many intellegent fics, but they all seem a tiny bit corny compared to this one. (it kinda reminds me of "vanilla sky". I never liked that movie though, it's eerie. (and straight.) in a bad way. your fic is eerie in a good way.)
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it's like a masterpiece you have created here. it's so much more that a mere fic. it's like.. art, magic, whatever. I don't know how the hell you friggin do it but it's brilliant and don't laugh at me for thinking that, in case you find great pleasure in writing a bunch of things that you find corny, and then laugh at the lame fangirls fussing over everything with depth.
I love how it all starts out as a very normal fic, about normal people with normal (or something) problems. and I love how one really dont see the supernatural things. like, I wasn't getting a thing during a very long period of time, and thought that kame and his blackouts were hilariously weird (guess I'm somewhat slow XD), but when I finally understood what it was all about, I was like... "AWESOME! *doesn't know where to go in fascination*" And I love the relationship between jin and kame, and kame being terrified, uncomfortable. you don't see that often in fics. it's complex, in this intellegent sort of way. and I've read many intellegent fics, but they all seem a tiny bit corny compared to this one.
(it kinda reminds me of "vanilla sky". I never liked that movie though, it's eerie. (and straight.) in a bad way. your fic is eerie in a good way.)