Oh my God. How are you so awesome. Never, ever stop writing ok?

I just... i love this story; i love your Jin - even after all that's happened he's still able to trust himself and his gut feeling. And your Pi - he's still trying to get past everything that happened, and he can't quite manage it yet - but he's still willing to believe in Jin, to trust in him and hang on for the ride. (Also, i'm intensely amused by soothsayer!Matsujun and his boy minion.) And wow - Ryo, I really, really love how you used him here - how, even though they've closed off those other lifepaths, they're still echoing backwards. Full circle, in a way.

Ok, i'll stop now, just - wow. Thank you.